Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Homework 10/7/09

Period 4
Study for Vocab Quiz

Period 4 & 5
Edit your essays and bring in a revised copy of your essay. I will compare it with the old copy.
Please see the link before to fix the formatting of your essay. The link takes you to a sample essay.


Period 5
Post Vocab sentences

If you are still wondering what needs to be done, because the red marks or comments weren't clear enough, here are some things you can do.

Arango, Jacob More research

Brazier, Rahsad Review your logic and make MORE clear

Curiel, Myra More research

Flores, Hope A little more research, work on clarity

Frame, Michael More research, work on style and tone

Gomez, Belen Add more commentary to make thesis clear

Kajioka, Jessica More research, more cohesion

Lomas, Raymond Begin sorting and organizing sentences

Marshall, Shaeed More research, redo outline, refine thesis

Martin, Thinishia More research, refine thesis, redo outline, work on clarity

Mendez, Yohita Work on style and tone, balance (CM) and (CD)

Quintana, Michelle Work on CM to match thesis, work on clarity

Rowell, Anna Add a little more commentary to relate to thesis

Snyder, Angie Work on relating to thesis and style and tone

Stevens, Stacey More research, ensure that you cite things correctly


Bosley, Kevin Work on flow, accurate citation

Diaz, Alex Complete the Essay, do research

Gonzalez, Amber Work on CM to match thesis

Martinez, Arieanna Do more research, Work on CM and CD to match thesis

Murphy, Chelsea refine thesis, work on clarity, make it more factual

Penn, Vivianna

Quintero, Kristian complete essay, do research

Ruiz, Adrianna Work on CM to match thesis, make it more factual

Watson, Aneishia complete essay, do research

Wells, Marvin Do more research, fix citations, work on clarity and cohesion

2 comments:

chelsea20 said...

1. T he toys I have adjunct.

2.My lava lamp is disjunction.

3.Laura announced their was a injunction.

4. Usually people hate the junta.

5. Susen imparted her speech last night.

6.My friend kiyomi is very impartial.

7. Bob is always describing things with participle.

8. My sister is a partisan.

Unknown said...

Compel verb: I was compelled to get her a glass of water.

Expel verb: She was expelled from the school promptly.

Impel verb:Reading the bible impelled me to volunteer.

Repulsion noun: Repulsion was the only reaction from the people.

Emissary noun; The emissary from the company was rude.

Manumission verb: I finally had manumission from the system

Missive noun; The missive was sweet and kind.

Remittance noun: The remittance every month was expensive.