Monday, October 5, 2009

Homework

Period 4 & 5

Fix any things that you KNOW FOR A FACT need to be changed in your Research paper.
Bring in a fixed copy for credit. I will give 20 pts credit and 10 Extra credit if you have documentation for this.

You know what those are:
Citations
Bibliography
Weak conclusions
Weak, confusing paragraphs
etc.

You will be getting them back tomorrow as I needed to make copies of the originals and had not done so.
You will also recieve the new rubric and please start thinking about a time that you would like to meet to work on them.

1 comment:

Arieanna said...

1) My fellow teammates of my party were my presidential emissaries to the rest of the campus.

2) The manumission of slaves in this country was one of the best events to ever happen in the world.

3) My missive from my team and I stated how crucial an education is.

4) Putting the remittance in an envelope is easy; it's the safety of it arriving in Sacramento I'm worried about.

5) I felt compelled to lead my volleyball team since it was not being done correctly.

6) I have to expel all the air from my lungs when I finish running a suicide.

7) I felt impelled to stand and speak to my fellow students at SPA to make a difference in our campus together.

8) I overcame my feeling on repulsion to speak in front of a really big crowd.